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| New draft |
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| Old draft |
When you compare the two, you can see that the dramatic reveal of the virus basically stays the same with only difference being where it happens.
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| New draft |
I don't have a screenshot of the previous script, but in it there was a cutaway to the "real" main characters of the full story used for comedy. Here I changed the cut away gag to the character Skye, who ends up being a main character anyways, being chased by the antagonists of the story. Again, it creates the same effect while being more plausible to film.
Having to restrict myself to one location has showed me how to take different ideas and unify them into one scene, which is much needed when your on a time and budget constraint.



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