The Monocle
CCR 1
How does your product use or challenge conventions and how does it represent social groups and issues?
Summary: A monkey has to sell a movie idea to a dragon. By explaining what makes it standout and what it represents, the monkey wins the dragon over.
CCR 2
How does your product engage with audiences and how would it be distributed as a real media text?
CCR 3
How did your production skills develop throughout this project?
Summary: My director's commentary over the script and film. I talk about my development as a writer, director, and editor.
CCR 4
How did you integrate technologies- software, hardware and online- in this project?
CCR Planning: Challenge Conventions and Representation
Our film challenges conventions by being a comedy with a traditionally horror-esque plot. In order to reflect on this while being creative, I could make a video about how to make a story that subverts expectations, like a video essay.
When thinking about representation, I first had a hard thinking of how I could talk about it in a meaningful way. This is because when creating the story and casting the parts I neglected to think about social groups or issues.
The antagonists are all men which can speak to how usually mad scientist and their henchmen are usually men, but a key difference is that the scientist is a person of color as opposed to a traditional white person.
As for the zombies, it's mostly women with one guy and they're all people of color. This was definitely not intentional as I just casted them because these people were available.
In fact, almost all the cast are people of color with the only white presenting person being mixed so I can probably do something with that.
CCR Planning: How does your project engage with audiences and how would it be distributed as a real media text?
The way the product engages with audiences is through visuals and being(hopefully) funny. Visually, the film is mostly in black and white, but the pops of green and blue via the zombie virus and cure will surely catch the audiences' attention. Me and Frankie also made sure to block the shots in such a way that whatever is most important is what the audience looks at. We did this through various techniques like the Rule of Thirds, Frontality, Distance, and as previously stated, Color.
The second way it engages with audiences is through it's jokes. The absurdity of The Doctor's antics and his henchmen along with the actors performances will surely get a chuckle. The visual jokes will also engage the audiences through Bartholomew's characterization and the use of the super soakers.
As for distribution, it would most likely be through online services like YouTube. Although, I could submit it for a film festival.
A creative way I can reflect on this is have people react to the movie and then ask them what caught their attention and why. Their responses will be the answers to the question. An example of this would the typical reaction videos you see on YouTube.
CCR Planning: How Did My Skills Develop?
Reflecting back on production, I can see how I developed as a director and writer.
First as a writer, I learned the format of a professional screenplay both for myself and to look good on the Production Proposal. I learned about the different amount of tabs for different parts of the script and about things like inserts.
As a director, figuring out all the elements of the film and how to put it together was a difficult challenge, but I was able to get it done. Being in charge of the making of all the props and casting was also a first time for me, but it was pretty fun. This leaves me with tons of material to work with.
As an editor this would be my first time using Premiere Pro. I had to learn the layout and the short cuts, which seemed daunting at first but I adapted pretty quickly. Using the Lumetri Color to achieve my vision was a difficult task as it was my first time using masks to change certain parts of the frame. Not to mention, keyframing the masks was very tedious.
Where I grew the most would be as an editor, but I shouldn't neglect the other two roles I had. I think the best way to reflect on all of this would be through a commentary that recounts the entire thing. Perhaps over the film.
CCR Planning: How Did You Integrate Technologies?
- iPhone(Ask Frankie for model)
- Tripod
- Microphone equipment from the teacher
- Legion laptop for editing
- Power tools
- Flash drive
- Macbook Pro
- Blackmagic Cam
- Premiere Pro
- Premiere Rush
- Google Docs
- Google Drive
- Photos
- iCloud storage
- iMessages
- YouTube
The Rough Cut
I put in the last shot and made the first rough cut of the film and it looks pretty good. I used Rush on my phone because I don't have access to Premiere at home so there's no effects or color grading added in, so when I say rough cut I mean ROUGH cut.
Most glaring issue is the 13 seconds over run time. Although I like everything in the film and thing it won't flow as well if I cut some footage, there is some stuff that isn't entirely necessary and will have to be cut out the film. The pacing of the film could also use some working though I fear it will not be how I want it considering how tight it will be crammed into with the two minute time limit. I still think the comedy will land regardless which is the most important part.
At the end of the day, the film doesn't have to be perfect and I can always have a little director's cut for myself and to share with others.
The Final Shot
With the table made we could finally finish filming. As opposed to going to the pathway that would be a fifteen minute walk, we decided to go to the woods behind my neighborhood as it was much closer, we didn't need to see the pathway, and a streetlamp had the same warm lighting that the electrical tower provided anyways. Frankie and our actor set up the table and tripod while I went back to the house to grab the super soaker we needed. When I came back I opened up the bag of soil, Frankie adjusted the tripod as needed, and we blocked the scene with our actor. We were finally ready to finish shooting.
| The setup |
| The actor under the table |
It took a couple of takes, and running back to my house for water, but we finally got the last shot done. To celebrate, I played the only song appropriate for the walk back, "We're All In This Together" from High School Musical. Because it was truly a group effort that made this possible.
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Reflecting back on production, I can see how I developed as a director and writer. First as a writer, I learned the format of a professiona...